[Candy]

time:

i love the character choice chronos is dope and relation to your name in modern times, the lol is the last thing i watched was space jam right before i read this i was like hell yes - this piece just fell straight into my lap.. i love that you kept the order of what realm/era the character was set i didnt like the cross of hitler just because it wasnt as flushed as the rest but the story and development was off the chain.. and the final thoughts of the author/character.. dope

nyc:
story wise this was on a whole nother level, like 3/4 pure entertainment great devilery, great pace but you had this adolescents part which i ddint think you could drag the story back but you manage to pull enough of it not to hate that section but just dislike it, its just imo once your character throws aways his future part, like the throwing of the future was captured but it was just written a little less adult.. all in all though dope story dope flow.. i was diggen it..

vote = nycspitz

i think this was hard to decide cause it was one of those one if you both wrote the same lines timeless would have taken it but nyc just had the more entertaining verse as you read along.. congratz and gl