[Master Rock]

This topic really got me focused on the vamps. Candy, I believe this was you best verse in this season thus far. I like the way you play with the onsets...with is crazy because I attempted to do the same similarly this week... like this line, "sure that the next step of pressing play plays we are some safe, ready for what awaits we wait ", I love this, so dope, so simple but works. There were some hiccups on grammar, but I filled in the gaps. I enjoyed it until the period blood part...gross my man...Haha... But overall fire. Timeless, you take was far from where I was thinking but I see your view. "A car on my ass, fucking asshole! I beg your pardon, as its a cop.
Kicked his lights on, I shit you not!", I felt this line because it personalizing the story and you're talking to me in confidence...I definitely dig it. Also it part is fire, "Youth harnessed in slums full of what ifs and yes men.
Checkers and chess then." This is showing the advancement of thought and how to react to ma given situation. Overall I liked both takes, but if I choose on who embodied the subject fully I would said Candy came with it. Great job on both brothas showing out.