Had a long, drawn out response to this battle but it got deleted. Here’s the gist of it though
Dom continues to surprise, every week he has something new for us, and it’s not so much of a evolution as much as it is an unveiling of a little bit more of the arsenal every week. The whole djinn/gin flip was so obvious that it was really surprising you know? Like it’s right there but I don’t think many people would have went in that direction and I liked the way you dialed up the imagery and descriptiveness here. It all felt like your average love lost story and then BAM the whole body horror scene happens and you’re left as the reader like uhh wtf is going on?! But it works so well and I was just impressed through and through with your piece. It was told so technically sound and had such a great flow to it. Dope stuff Dom you’re a formidable matchup for anyone here.
Rock:
You did your thing as well and the first half of your verse was much in the vein as Dominates but the second half seemed like things started to slow down, the rushed MR started to show up as he has so many times, I understand under the circumstances definitely but to beat a verse like your opponent’s you need to come with something out of this world. I think you took the path most traveled topic wise and didn’t really take any chances. The writing talent is there but you were out sparred here. Hope you can find some more time to flesh it out next week, you’ll definitely be in talks for championship bouts.
V/Dom
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