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Overall: Both writers had emotional stories that were solid as far as the content is concerned. It's engaging and kept me interested, the pace is good and I wanted to know how it all played out from the get go while reading both pieces. The execution of the writing was kind of meh, the use of the topic as a closure kind of lazy but the stories show a lot of promise for what's to come if they keep working and perfecting their craft further.

Master Rock had a good story going of love, passion, cheating, deceit and heartfelt motions throughout. The execution of certain lines/sections and so on were a bit jumbled to me, but lines like "I reap grimly as an executioner delivering a soul to send" got me wondering where tf this sudden form of excellence to paint an emotional picture came from. That was great.

Dominate had a pretty great showing as well but I think removing filler words here and there, adding a bit more creativity in the wording of certain lines to reduce repetition and perhaps the adding of names to his characters would have benefitted his verse further by a lot. In the end I was entertained by what was presented and will look forward to see him grow further.

Vote: Dominate for a cleaner and solid verse overall. Could have went to Master Rock with a bit more punctuation and polishing some lines that either came off a bit jumbled, or stretched. Enjoyed the read and the battle as a whole, cool stuff with some inspiring lines here and there.

Stay at it and keep the pen flowing.