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Old 04-11-2022, 08:37 PM   #7
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This was overall a very dope battle. Broken when in depth sharing a dirty dark twisted tale with many branches reaching in multiple areas. There were times where I felt a faltered in certain areas. But then it was times when he brought it back and flexed his abilities. There were times that I felt that his rhyming wasn't hitting at the right spots and that made it harder for me to engage. Dom on the other hand had a smooth flow throughout. And his story was concise and very clear as well as engaging throughout. I followed the whole thing and really got engaged in the whole conversation between the characters. It was as though I felt the picture come alive. Especially on a part when he mentions the journey and unworthy part. That's when it captured me. Honestly I have to give this to Dom for engagement and Flow. They both did good but Dom hit the nail on the head. Dope job both of you.
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