Cool topic. I like in @
Dank’s votes that he says what he thinks of when he looks at the pic given before critiquing the participants’ takes on it. It’s interesting to read what other people would do. I’m gonna adopt the same technique this week. So for this one, I thought the girl in the pic is being silenced, and the red/white/blue colours made me think of western (US/British/Aus) flags. So maybe I might’ve tried to write something about how it’s seen as unpatriotic and taboo to talk about _____ <— a few choices there. Anyways,
Sin - I’m just gonna assume you’re a deliberate troll and feed your verses as such. Unlike Adverse, I haven’t nearly had my fill of your schtick yet (gigiddy). Maybe I haven’t had to read as many of your verses as him. Or maybe I’m just immature. I had two genuine laugh out loud moments in this verse - “flowers are beautiful; DEVOUR THE SUITABLE” is a top tier Sinacogism, and “CHORUS” absolutely leaned me. Lots of other amusing bits but those were the stand outs. If you ever manage to stumble your way into a champ match via a string of no shows or something it’d be funny if you reverted back to the old AJ the Menace. Just for one battle. Then back to this. Thanks for the lols.
Donny - cool take! Not one I would have thought of but yeah it works. ‘Every picture takes a piece of soul with it’ was a good line that captured the essence of your verse towards the end there. Relatable idea, we all know a person obsessed with their social media presence/image. Maybe someone close to you inspired this. Or maybe someone you’re not so fond of… I liked tall glass of water that’s never empty, follows followed, - really good. Thanks for the read.
V/ Adonis