broken:
wow man that was one of the most detail stories i read what was dope was the lingth didnt come off as lengthy but entertaining and the fact you can actually read it in your verse that you went crazy in the crazy parts i actually dont settle for any verse that go in half ass soo the fact you took it there was dope.. il be honest you did actually loose the perfect story you had built half way through for a stanza but the fact it was meant to be like that rocked as much as i hated it i could still make sense of it.. really though it was the story that kept this together dope piece..
dom:
very biblical and it was just a direct story with solid punches.. the character development was and was a story that unfolded at a solid pace which made it feel realler/come to alive.. the rhyme was dope.. the characters interactions was dope even though you didnt delve into the others much it still it held its pace and unfolded in a way which was a cool development.. nice
vote: brokenhal0
just more of an engulfing respect..
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