master rock:
this piece mad me cry it was so beautifully sad.. your worked the topic to fine precision the story was beyond solid with such a soldi structure you get held within it the whole way.. n it was really just that sound that this person is in soo much pain but still had so much hope was just so touching.. dope piece..
obj:
yours was alot darker but for character development you got more personal with a lot less effort.. was a little less pretty then masters but still so touching due to emotion but both your description was on point.. i loved your relation to the character it was def deep.. the story itself was all there i was more relation to your verse enteriing this seeing the topic.. structure flow dope.. all in all cool piece..
vote = master rock
just a lil more touching i loved how you both had similar relations from one topic usually i hate but you both brought up the pain of the crutch - nice one guys xoxo gl
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