dank:
hehe i put on the "one head light" track on once you mentioned the wallflowers and right on que where you wrote dawn and i was reading it the lyrics in their song said it so i was hooked.. i think the topic itself for you two was dope.. it was a remarkable take on it what i consider the true brute dark reality of it.. i love your writers voice and relation to the smoke to the flower transitions.. vocab hot.. what was my fav part was your signatured yet original structure.. dope piece..
objective:
man this story was real real nice.. your structure and rhyme were tight but the story had such depth where for awhile you slammed the ish out of dank and this was a good battle to so thats no easy feet but by second part of the story that it start off strong and ended strong it had what felt like filler where as dank didnt.. the emotion and discription were fucken real cool in this piece.. i dont want you to get me wrong this was a dope piece:
vote = dank
wow what a battle gl guys
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