dom:
dude fire story, im the type of cat that story comes first before any other element of writing a verse.. and this was nice i like the concept but it was they you portrayed it, it came off very clean.. i think structure was tight and vocab but as far as rhyme it was a lil too loose for my style.. all in all cool piece though brah..
time:
very poeticly street orientated the rhyme was off the hook so clean with internals.. the structure was infinitely tighter then doms and just in general was dope.. it had very personal feeling to it as a whole.. it was simple but cool.. story wise not much to it but it def was delivered smoothly so nice nice..
vote = timeless
it came down to what i put before anything else which is story but when it comes down to more elements even though story covered covers more then one piece of need to make a good verse if you get out weighed in general it happens.. gl guys
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