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Adonis · 04-02-2022, 02:51 PM

Topic: ~Death of a Writer~

Life began with a key, the bolted door is now free
Unlocked potential potentially flowing through calligraphy
But this story began with a rookie thumbing at words
Not gifted in verse, in fact, he was stumbling at first
catching L after L, still, his votes were superb
Well read between lines, learned to slowly, manipulate verbs
Every action has reaction, and I’m @Certain he reacted, observe
He had @Paytience with pen, dedicated, intense
@Pent uP aggression in losses left him clutching, make sense?
He learned from the hate, the feed were nuggets and gems
Went from a @dead man inside, to the realest Benn Grimm
He took the smoke and the mirrors and refracted its lore
Writing once was a chore, now its engrained to the core
Dancing shadows of light during the darkest of night
Left his love blinded like genocide, only the death was a mic
During competition, labeled obnoxious, but he weathered the storm
Sold his soul to Mephisto to make his letters adorned
But if he learned how to write, maybe he’d learn about life
So he reached for the stars, but the @Soulstice meant he was burnt by the light
He’d never be the best, @RichardCorey, but he’d work like the goats
Enjoying pancakes with @oats, learning to swim, a budding @zygote
His lessons come due, at least he thinks that they have
Cause his @Objective to champ left a @brokenhal0 or two
Dreams to @Bodey a few had him swimming with sharks in the @Blue Bayou
His paper beat scissors cause he’s mastered the rock
Inhaling the @Dank, blowing white clouds as they gather in spots
Dreams of dominating addiction, man poems so @Vulgar yet cute
Early leagues, so aloof, but over time less, growth so astute
His @Adverse demeanor meant his sins were a cog in the wheel
Fortunately he learned to steer clear of jawing with peers
Now he’s sweeter than @Candy, no longer young @corleone
Once a stuttering Stanley, now a Don is, a pun-fully grown
He’s evicted his sorrow, enjoy the death of a writer
Shedding old skin left a newborn hoping for fire
Now all that he craves….these legends check into the cypher

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04-02-2022, 02:51 PM	#3
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	*Topic: ~Death of a Writer~* Life began with a key, the bolted door is now free Unlocked potential potentially flowing through calligraphy But this story began with a rookie thumbing at words Not gifted in verse, in fact, he was stumbling at first catching L after L, still, his votes were superb Well read between lines, learned to slowly, manipulate verbs Every action has reaction, and I’m @Certain he reacted, observe He had @Paytience with pen, dedicated, intense @Pent uP aggression in losses left him clutching, make sense? He learned from the hate, the feed were nuggets and gems Went from a @dead man inside, to the realest Benn Grimm He took the smoke and the mirrors and refracted its lore Writing once was a chore, now its engrained to the core Dancing shadows of light during the darkest of night Left his love blinded like genocide, only the death was a mic During competition, labeled obnoxious, but he weathered the storm Sold his soul to Mephisto to make his letters adorned But if he learned how to write, maybe he’d learn about life So he reached for the stars, but the @Soulstice meant he was burnt by the light He’d never be the best, @RichardCorey, but he’d work like the goats Enjoying pancakes with @oats, learning to swim, a budding @zygote His lessons come due, at least he thinks that they have Cause his @Objective to champ left a @brokenhal0 or two Dreams to @Bodey a few had him swimming with sharks in the @Blue Bayou His paper beat scissors cause he’s mastered the rock Inhaling the @Dank, blowing white clouds as they gather in spots Dreams of dominating addiction, man poems so @Vulgar yet cute Early leagues, so aloof, but over time less, growth so astute His @Adverse demeanor meant his sins were a cog in the wheel Fortunately he learned to steer clear of jawing with peers Now he’s sweeter than @Candy, no longer young @corleone Once a stuttering Stanley, now a Don is, a pun-fully grown He’s evicted his sorrow, enjoy the death of a writer Shedding old skin left a newborn hoping for fire Now all that he craves….these legends check into the cypher ... __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 04-02-2022 at 03:01 PM.