sin:
this is one of the tightest little prose's you have writen.. so subtle and very pretty for how dark the matter is.. and vocab was hot but didnt tip itself over where it was noticeable but the smoothness of the structure was tight to i really dug the story it was fire and it was what some may call an adition to where i was up to with all the current stories.. dope with a lot of detail
eviction:
flow was dope and the vocab with structure was cool man really loved the line it had a pulse of soft fluffyness.. loved it taste greeeat.. first bar fire im like hells yeh we def did just kiss hehe very cute but so morbid loved it.. i loved the end it dragged on a lil for like 8/10 bars and it was contained but as far as progression for that amount of bars it didnt really do much except create more open space for the first few bars to sit.. but yeh like i said the last line was dope so it was worth it in part..
vote = sinagog
this was a hard match to decide on because as far as contained subject matter he didnt miss a beat it was tight hard hitting and really dug its fangs into the reader.. where as eviction did with wild punches but in the end even though there was a ko punch it was more like you need more to hold yourself against something so big in such a little form.. person evict i felt you brought it and this could go either way but gl guys
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