Netcees - View Single Post - [Round 3] 2. Advanced Placement vs (N/A) JaysonFresh/evaD

Blue Bayou · 02-10-2022, 04:33 PM

Jay and Dave

Opener a decent meta.. talk game with lesser stars is a cool swag concept to me.. multi lazy af tho
Bulletin wp been done a bunch but I thought this was still cool with the np flip
Nanny is a big miss.. I'm someone who usually likes these kind of lines but I don't think the concept is strong enough here
Castaway was ight but could've been cleaned up
Wordle is a cool and pretty dece current event concept.. they "yellow" worked well as delivered
Weak in the knees is a hilarious short bar
Is straya a common phrase used for AUS? feels a bit forced conceptually but maybe I'm wrong... wp is cool
Ayers rock is a cool concept but I think maybe I'm missing the wink and skip reference to it?

Vs.

9mm is funny and a pretty solid start
Keep her circle small is hilarious. Fire concept
Fresh Aer nah.. light np
Dead to rights is played... the wording is really good on this bar but it's a played idea as is the arrest tie in
Turn down for what is a banger.. lmao... lotb probably, great delivery
Arm out is pretty good for an avy punch.. not a fan of them in general really unless it's a pic diss but this was pretty creative and well delivered for an indirect gun bar
Mastercard is flames. Dope concept
Hooray is an okay wp.. chuckle worthy

Good read guys. Pretty good battle overall. Both teams I think were pretty consistent with a couple misses from both, but some very enjoyable concepts as well
Pretty close to me but I loved the Mastercard and Turn Down for What bars so the strengths of the highs edge this to Dom and Aero for me

Props to all

02-10-2022, 04:33 PM	#16
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	Jay and Dave Opener a decent meta.. talk game with lesser stars is a cool swag concept to me.. multi lazy af tho Bulletin wp been done a bunch but I thought this was still cool with the np flip Nanny is a big miss.. I'm someone who usually likes these kind of lines but I don't think the concept is strong enough here Castaway was ight but could've been cleaned up Wordle is a cool and pretty dece current event concept.. they "yellow" worked well as delivered Weak in the knees is a hilarious short bar Is straya a common phrase used for AUS? feels a bit forced conceptually but maybe I'm wrong... wp is cool Ayers rock is a cool concept but I think maybe I'm missing the wink and skip reference to it? Vs. 9mm is funny and a pretty solid start Keep her circle small is hilarious. Fire concept Fresh Aer nah.. light np Dead to rights is played... the wording is really good on this bar but it's a played idea as is the arrest tie in Turn down for what is a banger.. lmao... lotb probably, great delivery Arm out is pretty good for an avy punch.. not a fan of them in general really unless it's a pic diss but this was pretty creative and well delivered for an indirect gun bar Mastercard is flames. Dope concept Hooray is an okay wp.. chuckle worthy Good read guys. Pretty good battle overall. Both teams I think were pretty consistent with a couple misses from both, but some very enjoyable concepts as well Pretty close to me but I loved the Mastercard and Turn Down for What bars so the strengths of the highs edge this to Dom and Aero for me Props to all __________________ "I shit myself I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback Uve won" -kungfugrip Last edited by Blue Bayou; 02-10-2022 at 06:57 PM.