these niggas cant write. proof was afta' last rnd yall left as losers
now watch audience laugh at every line u butcher like closing credit bloopers
good solid punch
fresh a 1 man brigade. graveyard is where i save u a space in
bc afta' one punch sharps'll end up in a box .. hospital waste bin.
eh i get the idea but i would've left concept in the throwaways pile
hand over the reigns to evaD, leave em embarrassed/shook
these pussies clear out quicker than a eviction notice at planned parenthood.
not really digging this, too simple and overdone
These skinny losers lost already, no wonder their chance is the slenderest
When their last battle was such a wash finny can’t even remember it
lol this is funny, but execution wise could be cleaner
Mention exes around Sharp and your getting cringes
Cus the lengths his went to to get away from him were usually seven inches
ok
Divorcee teacher and window cleaner? I guess we’ll give this pair a fair crack
But I’m surprised you two got saddled together.. when you usually ride each other bareback
cool closer
when I dunk it suddenly, hands down, it's a full-court shot
when Dave dunks it, hands cuffed. gives it a shot at the court
the rhyme here is really what's throwing me off, but ok start
ur girl called, i'm good sport.. so i tried to stay out of it
I tried to Warner Bro.. but she rocks the top like a box office hit
ok, warner bro wp just reminds me of those "warn a brother" tshirts so it doesnt really have any novelty to it
she was an escort by the way. took my wallet before I could run
got the most out penny-wise anyways. the bitch swallowed all my children !
the children/could run rhyme might work in an audio here, but it's offputting in text format. the execution here is also a bit sloppy
plus, all the excuses girls throw at him makes me intrigued..
you have seen more red cards in a week than the whole Premier League
cool, the general idea has definitely been done before though
last summer classic was a travesty.. NCs history starts to blacken
shits like armenian genocide. even Dave acts like it didn't happen
the main thing i need for this bar to work is for the name "Dave" to somehow be tied to armenian genocide, and im not that much of a history buff to know that it does and a google search doesn't really say anything about there being a relationship between the two
Fresh dead corpse.. when u hear the blast its too late to pray
murder scenes like tonga volcano.. washes ashore 8k miles away
ok
credit bloopers was lotb for me. i feel like both teams showed a stronger performance in round 1, but Jayson/evaD had a few lines I was kinda digging. Nothing really caught my eye from mac/sharp if I'm being honest and the rhyming issues didn't help. I definitely appreciate Sharp/Mac for stepping up to fill the empty spot and showing, but I have to give my vote to the team that I felt had a stronger verse
v/ JaysonFresh & evaD
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