[Dominate]

these niggas cant write. proof was afta' last rnd yall left as losers
now watch audience laugh at every line u butcher like closing credit bloopers
OKish. There's not really any wp here, just talking about a different context for ppl laughing at butchered lines.
fresh a 1 man brigade. graveyard is where i save u a space in
bc afta' one punch sharps'll end up in a box .. hospital waste bin.
Alright. Could have been worded better IMO. "sharps'll" - you're talking about something belonging to Sharp. Could have worded it to mean his family/crew. As is it looks like you're talking about his punches ending up in a box, which isn't as good.
hand over the reigns to evaD, leave em embarrassed/shook
these pussies clear out quicker than a eviction notice at planned parenthood.
Hmmm not quite... maybe if you'd said these FAKE pussies
These skinny losers lost already, no wonder their chance is the slenderest
When their last battle was such a wash finny can’t even remember it
LOL. Good. Probably lotb. Personal punch on point and the flip is funny
Mention exes around Sharp and your getting cringes
Cus the lengths his went to to get away from him were usually seven inches
Good personal punch again and flipped creatively. I swear you were talking about 7 inch dicks in your last verse as well though. What's your fixation with this specific length?/
Divorcee teacher and window cleaner? I guess we’ll give this pair a fair crack
But I’m surprised you two got saddled together.. when you usually ride each other bareback
Cool. Not as hard hitting as the last couple but it's an OK line. Haven't seen the wp before.


when I dunk it suddenly, hands down, it's a full-court shot
when Dave dunks it, hands cuffed. gives it a shot at the court
Doesn't rhyme for me... Not really feeling this anyway though. The wp isn't fresh and not worded smooth/harsh enough to compensate.
ur girl called, i'm good sport.. so i tried to stay out of it
I tried to Warner Bro.. but she rocks the top like a box office hit
This is OK, not bad.
she was an escort by the way. took my wallet before I could run
got the most out penny-wise anyways. the bitch swallowed all my children !
Cool concept. Again with the rhyming though. It hurts you here bc this line coulda been a hitter but that really fucks up the impact when it doesn't rhyme. Guessing you're not American and it probably sounds fine to you. I can empathise. Sorry bud. Maybe get your tag partner to check. Also, pro tip: the ! at the end of the line can only hurt you. It adds nothing if a reader thinks the line is good, and if a reader thinks the line is bad it makes you look worse for thinking it's good. I've literally never seen a line enhanced by a ! at the end of it.
plus, all the excuses girls throw at him makes me intrigued..
you have seen more red cards in a week than the whole Premier League
Basic wp but it's an OK bar
last summer classic was a travesty.. NCs history starts to blacken
shits like armenian genocide. even Dave acts like it didn't happen
Unless I'm missing a wp or a personal here (and sincere apologies if that's the case), nah.
Fresh dead corpse.. when u hear the blast its too late to pray
murder scenes like tonga volcano.. washes ashore 8k miles away
Nah. Same as last bar. You've read the news but... OK? You've gotta do something with it. Needs at least a basic wordplay, not just a different context for comparison


V/ Fresh & Dave. Higher highs and misses weren't as low.