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dave and jayson-- I liked the opener, a little long winded, but pretty clever. Also felt the Head n dip quill line was pretty solid. the other two bars didnt do it for me

quill & adverse--- burger at wendys was nicely worded but such an old concept. antonio brown was a nice recent event but out of all the angles that could of been done this one was pretty vanilla. really only line i cared for was the high school combo closer


with that said, I gotta go with dave and jayson by like half a line. quill and adverse had mostly great wording but lacked in real creativity