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yall wack af. one of u too corny, the other's punches come up short
couldnt connect to a live person if ya fist yelled 'representative' over customer support

The idea here is nice conceptually, I think the wording of “live person” came off a bit unnatural sounding and clunky but I see how it was kind of necessary to tie-in the customer support angle also. It’s a tough one, general idea is good, but is difficult to really get down well in its delivery and make it hit without sounding overly wordy.

plus fresh the type to shoot ya while sleepin at point blank
you lie motionless as i uncover the sheets like a magician's tablecloth yank

I’m not such a fan of this one personally, I feel like it’s missing something, or I’m missing something, here. Doesn’t the magician usually cover the body then remove the tablecloth and POOF! the person beneath it is gone? I’m not entirely sure if that’s called a tablecloth yank or not but that’s what comes to mind, and I’m still not entirely sure what that has to do with anything else going on here in truth. I’m kind of at a loss on this one, tbh.

And your clever friend is a feathered pen, your tourney path is ending quick
Ironic how whenever Quill’s writing I just scratch my head n dip

Nice. I liked the name play tie in here, simple but effective. I’m sure Quill will have seen similar over a time but I don’t pay much attention to text battles and this is new to me at least and worded well enough for it to work.

This pair of losers collaborating in the lab is no threat
If I found you two holed up in the studio then Jayson’s already stabbed you to death

I liked this one too, maybe a little generic rather than getting at them personally like I would have preferred but it’s still a decent enough line to have some impact, maybe just needed something as a stronger closer ideally to really end on a high. Overall though not bad, I felt like you worked well together and had some good stuff in there but a couple misses too.