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Old 12-14-2021, 10:48 AM   #15
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Originally Posted by Eŋg View Post
either way, your verse is literal ass-sauce.



i'm good, you?

Ah yes with garbo like this you’re not qualified to critique anyone’s writing. You on that island boy level of writing. I’m assuming you’re 12 and just getting started. Stick with it kid. Don’t read the grown ups verses it’s not your mumble rap style

“ my soul wanders no longer,
no bother the way i flow lava,
this shit a wrap, my wit collapsed,
possibly contest's mismatched,
that quality content intact,
give daps. retract ya fist fast,
you ain't used to the contact,
inhaling some fumes from the cognac,
most rhymes i produce: bombast,”
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