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Eŋg · 12-11-2021, 10:33 AM

It actually did read this, and am surprised by how bad it is from three decades-old 'vets', or that anyone thought it was remotely ok.

The last verse was serviceable actually, but not those other two.

Deus-sama.

12-11-2021, 10:33 AM	#10
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	It actually did read this, and am surprised by how bad it is from three decades-old 'vets', or that anyone thought it was remotely ok. The last verse was serviceable actually, but not those other two. Deus-sama.