this shit was corny, bro.. I for one once was a gospel MC myself and I thoroughly know the bible, in and out.. I studied theology courses and everything in North Carolina while I lived out there for about a year or so.. and what you rhymed about was totally off topic and basically had no relation like whatsoever to the topic at hand, pertaining to the bible passage you referenced.. sorry bro.. not feelin it.. keep practicing.. peace
heres a few tracks I recorded as a gospel MC back in 2007..
"Memory Lane" -
https://corleone.mobi/track/1816660/memory-lane
"Life Of A Thug" -
https://corleone.mobi/track/1816656/life-of-a-thug
"Dynamite" -
https://corleone.mobi/track/1874283/...feat-drum-lord