I thought it was some pretty stellar shit for what it was, you're an intelligent writer with a strong grasp on rhythm, and there's more than enough reason: conceptually you can bring thought-provoking matter on a platter to the table, where I certainly found some resonance, to boot. I agree with whoever said the first verse was most impressive, I enjoyed the crisper, clearer final verse too, but nothing in between was unsavoury. Enjoyed it quite a lot.
And I'm sure I've fed this before, at length.
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