I feel drunk after reading this, but in a good, cheerful, non-aggressive sort of way. The rhyme scheme was exceptional—the slants, hanging rhymes and inners were all very well done. The fall down the rabbit hole was as complexed as it was enthralling—as to was your choice in vocabulary. Eventful read, Alice.
“ really, I’m just a loaner of patterns
and art is perceptive!
and for the people!
but what you don’t see is..
I woulda sold it to fandom
if it was holdin‘ some value
to any lonesome man/savage
Juliette complex:
we’re on a constant
culprit conscious
the amusement’s conflict
juke on boxes
plus a nickel for your time
- Vaudeville novice
living off a rhyme’s sake
it’s a fucking mind state”
^loved it!
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