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Old 06-22-2013, 08:09 PM   #10
Rawn M.D.
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If I rolled up on your block bitch you wouldn't be hanging around
you fuckin pussy? ......Only when im bringing confrontation an staring you down
-alright, kinda simple concept, wording coulda been better
Girls love my rough approach n rugged looks, I always go through the back door
If Prys got rugged looks to..its cus mike j fox took to his face wit a hacksaw
-usually i dig redundant punches like this but J Fox is kinda over used to me, and the imperfect rhyme kinda damaged it even more
Im guessing you don't do well with the oppisate sex...am i right?
I really don't wanna pry....which is the response you get every single night
-lol, pretty basic, but funny non-the-less
Your the type to just succumb, fall over and take hits like a pimps slag
you don't swing back which is the only difference between you an a punchbag
-nah, to simple and again the imperfect rhyme hurt
You need to evolve, step up to my level, pryde your below par
As a man im 3 stages up from pry, mate << that's all that you are
-best line of ur verse imo..set up to punch executed right..

doing the same punch and calling it fresh... unfortunatley I'm the one that birthed it
I guess I was careless << which is the exact same feeling I get when reading your verses
-decent opener, simple concept tho
I mean your whole styles depressin, shit its older then nikas kicks
Yeah sure Ive said flo is progressive...... 's spokeswoman and shit
-lol, well set-up is wrong cuz nik b coppin NEW kicks on the steady, this coulda been executed ALOT better, but i get where ur going...
No this is not a diss bro, your writing SHOWS you have no heaters
I dont EVER think that formula won, but then again i dont like nascar either
-no, total miss to me - unless formula is an aka of flo..but if its just formula1/nascar..very fillerish and simple
We know you ain't getting signed with that style, and your hustling is weak kid
Last time someone gave props for flo... real deal made detour think he beat diz
-lol, alright
Player? Lol. Bitches give you chances and you don't do shit
I mean he really just post in the discussion.... and even there he lookin stupid
-bad closer very statement'ish

i unno what yall sayin above...this was kinda close to me...i feel that flow's imperfect rhymes on multi's hurt him alot, but his verse was overall more personal and direct..pryde's verse came off a little more generic n statmentish to me, nothing really was direct...both verses i did feel had lines with a lot more potential but the wording was poor and kinda null'd out the punch effect...i gotta go with the more direct verse tho...

vote - flow

but this was closer then yall makin it seem to me at least.

Last edited by Rawn M.D.; 06-22-2013 at 08:21 PM.