This really got gradually interesting as it progressed to an even more elevated, reflective level. Some rhymes, like the start/hard section, seemed simple yet still nice within the entire concept. I didn’t really care for the “rusty knife” metaphorical aspect as it’s a bit typical for this kind of approach I feel. That’s the only “criticism” I have though. I simply loved the concept and the direction you took with this - nothing new but it’s just incredibly genuine and that’s something I appreciate. Every line felt real, for lack of a better word here. But the last line was a highlight to me. Thanks for sharing.
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