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Cereal · 08-31-2021, 09:23 AM

really nice vocab the story was cool not much to it but a really flushed out verse, sucks that you didnt get showed.. but structure nice not too loose but not too tight.. vocab was really sweet though which gives a nice imagery.. keep it real dude

thanks

08-31-2021, 09:23 AM	#5
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 859 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312300	really nice vocab the story was cool not much to it but a really flushed out verse, sucks that you didnt get showed.. but structure nice not too loose but not too tight.. vocab was really sweet though which gives a nice imagery.. keep it real dude thanks __________________ A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass ..