Joe E. Murder: Some of those rhymes were a bit corny. They do conjure up a laugh though. The flow moves well, the wordplay isn't up to snuff, but the punches came pretty hard. The wordplay took a few tries to really see the intri***y.
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Originally Posted by Joe E murder best line
You'll vanquish with claims! The hate in his face, opens up a question: "Of how can I tune in weight with a great?"
He isnt made to defame! So, I aint talking about asylums when I say he STILL couldnt put "ENDSANE in his place!"
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Camp Bell: The wordplay was really good. I can't help but think that it flowed awkwardly. The punches weren't there. Felt a bit like generics. One or two really wack bars opening, though the end was pretty tight. Still, bars were stretched tight and overall represented a pretty good effort.
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Originally Posted by Camp Bells' Best
why attempt to hurt me bruh, ya vicious flurry of fictitious wording sucks
you get bitches but kitten hoarding the only way he get the pussy snug
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Both you guys are dope, but I gotta go with
Joe E. Murder. It took me a few reads to get the references, but good job with set-ups, punches, and personals. Don't see personals much in text battles, real unique stuff.