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Adverse · 08-22-2021, 04:09 AM

Really liked the way you bounced around flow wise, it kept the piece engaging. It sort of kept it going like a montage cutting to different scenes, vocabulary was nice and imagery was very cool. It was an entertaining read

08-22-2021, 04:09 AM	#7
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Really liked the way you bounced around flow wise, it kept the piece engaging. It sort of kept it going like a montage cutting to different scenes, vocabulary was nice and imagery was very cool. It was an entertaining read