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Old 08-22-2021, 04:02 AM   #2
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I mean what you’re doing here is cool, I like how the words play off of each other it was nicely done in that respect, felt kinda like Eminem’s infinite. Kind of just a showmanship of vocabulary and I did enjoy it in that aspect. Feel like the flow might get lost in audio just because of the sheer amount of content you’re packing per bar, although I haven’t heard you deliver it over a beat yet so I’ll reserve my opinion on that.

It was cool for what it was, don’t think it necessarily broke any molds but it’ll all come down to how everything is delivered on the audio side of things if it’s a truly good product or not

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