MMLP:
Buttery flow man. Nice and easy to rap, which is always a plus. Packed a lot of rhymes in this one.
Kind of like Universe's piece I'm a little lost with the plot. (SO maybe the problem is MY reading comprehension). By that I mean, the wicked witch, the widow and the dead husband's grave lost me a bit. But the piece was still enjoyable for me and technically sound.
Timeless:
Good verse. It seems like a verse about addiction but you don't scream and shout addiction; you do it very subtly and with literary devices.
Lost everything. Only left to remember when times were great.
This is a great line and encapsulated the piece.
Good to see you writing again, and the sky is the limit because I know you can do even better. Against a lesser opponent this verse probably takes the W.
But I'm voting MMLP because his flow was the star of the show and overpowered the match here.
That being said I think timeless had a "deeper" piece with a bit more substance. So this was close.
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