Netcees - View Single Post - DL round 1 (Master Rock vs Activate Self)-Activate Self WINS

Cereal · 08-18-2021, 11:17 PM

Creativity-- activate self - compare to master rocks which is 100% original and impactful AS just shone through with this amazing maze of tongue twisting lines to character to character.. all explored by bar by bar.. just enjoyable ride..

Entertainment-- master rock - this came down whos was looser.. mr didnt miss a beat and was soo deep.. where as activate self was soo explored but there was alot of lines that suffered from being what i would call filler..

Flow-- master rock - tight.. i would say spat to a beat yeh that is very simple and easy to master.. where as you have to put in an effort by the time you get to the end.. but this was a good category for this battle because both were strong but both 100% different.. i think AS lost points for being too complicated not that its a bad thing but just one that just flows just flows..

Rhyme Scheme-- Activate Self - there is more substance that is structured by scheme that is a solid pattern.. where master rock started off strong fell a lil loose by the end..

Consistency/Topic-- Master Rock - perfect capture of the topic, AS came across a bit extensive which kinda burnt the topic if you know what i mean..

Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- Activate Self - woowzer this was his number 1 category.. he just shone through at this punch for punch.. master rock def no slumb dog millionaire though he brought some nice internals, end rhymes ect..

Emotion-- Master Rock - it was just so thorough through and through.. and very peaceful whilst Activate Self was hard hitting and punchy.. this one def came down to a matter of taste.. both came with it..

Imagery-- Activate Self - master rock made a piece that was what felt like you could overlook the whole thing as if it started on a blank canvas and his verse still didnt touch the canvas.. so it sucks voting against something so beautiful in imagery that you could see with a birds eye view but activate self just really threw line for line i mean some were a bit much but alot werent.. dope work guys..

vote = master rock

going into the vote i didnt think i was going for you big guy cause AS you really brought it.. it came down to how clean the verse was as a whole.. so lol i had to actually look at as a negative to vote lol master rock was less of an eyesore

08-18-2021, 11:17 PM	#6
Cereal killa Join Date: Jun 2018 Posts: 859 Battle Record: 1-6 Rep Power: 1312300	Creativity-- activate self - compare to master rocks which is 100% original and impactful AS just shone through with this amazing maze of tongue twisting lines to character to character.. all explored by bar by bar.. just enjoyable ride.. Entertainment-- master rock - this came down whos was looser.. mr didnt miss a beat and was soo deep.. where as activate self was soo explored but there was alot of lines that suffered from being what i would call filler.. Flow-- master rock - tight.. i would say spat to a beat yeh that is very simple and easy to master.. where as you have to put in an effort by the time you get to the end.. but this was a good category for this battle because both were strong but both 100% different.. i think AS lost points for being too complicated not that its a bad thing but just one that just flows just flows.. Rhyme Scheme-- Activate Self - there is more substance that is structured by scheme that is a solid pattern.. where master rock started off strong fell a lil loose by the end.. Consistency/Topic-- Master Rock - perfect capture of the topic, AS came across a bit extensive which kinda burnt the topic if you know what i mean.. Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- Activate Self - woowzer this was his number 1 category.. he just shone through at this punch for punch.. master rock def no slumb dog millionaire though he brought some nice internals, end rhymes ect.. Emotion-- Master Rock - it was just so thorough through and through.. and very peaceful whilst Activate Self was hard hitting and punchy.. this one def came down to a matter of taste.. both came with it.. Imagery-- Activate Self - master rock made a piece that was what felt like you could overlook the whole thing as if it started on a blank canvas and his verse still didnt touch the canvas.. so it sucks voting against something so beautiful in imagery that you could see with a birds eye view but activate self just really threw line for line i mean some were a bit much but alot werent.. dope work guys.. vote = master rock going into the vote i didnt think i was going for you big guy cause AS you really brought it.. it came down to how clean the verse was as a whole.. so lol i had to actually look at as a negative to vote lol master rock was less of an eyesore __________________ A-double scribble - A 19 th century euphemism for ass ..