[Cereal]

Creativity-- mmlp - man that was pretty as hell, the witch insert was cool it came from left field but melded in well.. timeless still cool it def popped

Entertainment-- mmlp - this was much closer then it appears by bar size, but it did come down to the overflow and carrying colours that were portrayed.. i think it was deeply moving as far as just enough emotion but the story itself was what held it as a whole.. timeless very entertaining though..

Flow-- mmlp - some lines were hot as hell.. the flow was bouncing wording wise def held it together, saying that timeless still brought it in the flow area

Rhyme Scheme-- mmlp - timeless was really tight for such long lines but mmlp really shoned like prior the lines were rarely loose and def not stretched

Consistency/Topic-- timeless - i think his depth was what really shone in his verse he didnt leave topic for that much substance

Literary Devices (alliteration, assonance, allusion, etc..) -- mmlp - he mastered some of those lines were off the hook with such a tight structure and it was your sound alike end rhyming your really stretch the english language

Emotion-- timeless - soo heavy in emotion, very deep it goes for the throat and keeps you there dope..

Imagery-- mmlp - the tale was very childhood fantasy like a lil storybook it really fell in with the topic well..

Vote-- mmlp

this was closer then it appeared.. but in the end it came down to the stronger story and just more flushed out