[Adonis]

Glare - To me this verse was decent. The rhyming was good, but the bars them selves were so different in length that it did disrupt my flow. But, like I said, the rhyme schemes were there. Everything else was pretty nice, I can't complain about the verse. You used the topic literally, and built a character from it which is nice, I always loved good ol' fashioned character build up. All in all, nothing to write home about, but a decent verse none the less.

Zy - I loved this verse. The reading as literature, aside from it being just a "rap topical" if you will, was very intriguing and informative. The viasuals from the entire verse were very strong. You gave me many images, and swarmed many thoughts into my noggin. I loved this verse, but... It was just too preachy to me. The writing itself is not preachy, I think, lecture is a better word, but it was just too over the top. I appreciate the extreme flip on the concept, the intellect condensed into a rather fluid format of rhyme while holding the highest level of depth as far as "meat" of a verse. But again, it was just too over the top. This was a classic "Topical" in a sense, yet this type of verse, twist on a concept and direcetion are all before there time.

Vote - Glare. had something more relatable and played to my preference slightly more.