[~RustyGunZ~]

Tag-team champ?
Exaggerating is what you must do in your free time, loser
Because you were less like Blue’s partner, and more like a benign tumor

Is there a concept here? A tie in? Or you just forced a multi with a comma for basic name calling?


Zero potential, I’ll do the favor and leave you in a hole bleeding
No wonder the noose has never worked, you got one helluva low ceiling

This is nice, great execution

Step to me it’s death, I eliminate guys in sick ways
I’ll chop him up, hit the alley and push ‘em out the trunk like a mixtape

This is cool but too familiar.

INF will have a joke about Jamie, I mean we know that he’s planned this
But most of us here have a functioning brain, so chances are we won’t understand it

Aight, kinda light. Similar to the opener. I know UPN has a simpler style with wording and harshness being the appeal, but you have to have some sort of concept, at least even a joke or some sort. It doesn't cut it to just word a general insult well.

Give us both guns and I’m unloading mine on a fly pattern
You hold yours with two hands shaking, but nothing coming out like a shy bladder

This is fire


So stop crying for attention, that shit is sad as can be
This last line isn’t even a punch bro, for real. Get some help. Not just mentally and emotionally but for those sad ass bars you write and concepts you waste on the daily... uhh cannabis trees

The problem with this is it doesn't even come off as a throw away bar, it's clearly an attempt to end the verse on a light note in a way that negs your opponent subtlely but the issue is that it isn't very subtle and comes off kind of low class and slightly cringe. the UHHH CANNBUS TRES ending is what made me want to fuck Jaime in front of you.

vs

First alias run; you bitching about votes was a given..
I saw Top Down & implode on every lvl like a controlled demolition

the wording on top down and implode was weird, didn't read like an actual sentence. Concept was just okay.

Zuch got a tool for a feature.. mods know that he might blow
The Irony's to be a Sharp Pick he'd have to put his nose to the grindstone

Not the best nose concept, and anything using Sharps name and being a word/nameplay based on it's definition is played out.

1 punch make it crook right. i'll walk away w/ ya cute wife
Jamie'll leave on my arm rescued from a fucked up bridge like True Lies

Not good. I haven't seen the show but won't bother googling since your punchline is that you'd fly off into the sunset on a helicopter with his crackhead ex to save her from a bridge burning down? I don't see her clinging onto this verse, so I wouldn't worry about her falling off any collapsing structures.

Feed her Aeros wand airplane style, high vocals in the noise
You'd think it's rudge2 how ya walk in to find Infancy choking on a toy

You really know how to ruin a concept. First you say you'll feed his girl another mans dick, in a way that ties into to the way a child eats.. use a nonsense end rhyme that means literally nothing. Then you bring in his actual child in this bar about his ex choking on another textcees dick that you have guided to her mouth, I imagine using Austins butthole as a short of thumb holder, maybe your other hand on his shoulder for precision. All to not even word the fucking wordplay correctly? Inf an see WHAT? Inf and see choking on a toy?? Inf and see HER choking on a toy.. Where the fuck is the pronoun or noun?? Jesus christ did you learn how to text battle yesterday?

Yo bet it was living hell isolated during that fling in jail
Claim in ur Biomass offenses but no energy to last in a Single Cell

This is cool

Blue bin sending u lines too. bro, what's shown is played
Now were asking: Hazmat scraped bottom of the barrel for his throwaways?

Cool nameplay

What a stupid battle. If this was a 6 line battle man what a mediocre to good read it would have been but you both felt the need to go more than that.

Vote: Zuch, but there aren't really any winners today.