Dave
Like the reverse punch on on weak draw. Creative.
Chernobyl was clean. Decent.
XI’s duty was okay.
Tom Brady was okay.
Dickens was dope.
Closer was a no.
Bleak
Opener was a cool concept but executed poorly.
Oh darn. Gas vapors was clean. Nice.
Black widow was solid but underwhelming. Could have done better.
Mag segment was ehh.
Pull your card was a no.
Giannis bar seems like you just wanted to rhyme Antetokounpo, but in reality it was a lazy finish
Bleak was hanging on through the first couple bars but then stalled out. Dave was clean for the most part with a couple dope bars. Really liked Dickens. Gas vapors was dope from bleak.
Cool read.
Vote - Dave
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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