2triple0 - The worldplay was really good, the rhyming wasn't... I like that you were working with really complex schemes. You def. got your own style... but the whole scheme seemed uninspired here. You were able to land punches, and the verses felt a little personalized. The meter was a bit off. It didn't seem to rhyme very well.
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Originally Posted by triple0
im bagging the loot sitting on plenty bitching enemy
you drop a verse but it wasnt quoteworthy rip this uup jeffrey
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Flo Real = It was really bland. The lines hit hard, but they were very generic and simple. I fell like you need to be more creative. The lines were rhyming. The flow here is awkward.
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Mo fucker When I hit on bitches they think I'm a great kiss*
I bet when you hit on bitches they think is he a rapist?
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This was definintley a style clash. The verses seem to be a bit sloppy. Both you guys have major talent, but both seem a bit sloppy. Still, I gotta edge it to
2Triple0 just on the creativity..