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Old 07-19-2021, 08:06 PM   #2
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Fuck me this was terrific. Too many quotables.

Some of my favs:

"for hyper advanced mechanical use.
The gamble was huge we trampled the dunes
like Arabic Jews in gravity boots
"

- Cool imagery.

"cos Lucifer's dungeon was the Martian campaign.
The harshest terrain, just parchness and grains and arsenic rain
like a star set ablaze in Andromeda space
."

- Loved the multi's/imagery here.

"near pyramid blocks that appeared to be ruins
of ancient Egyptian and Angkor influence.
Saw faces of Druids and Olmecs in stones
adjacent to races with human genomes
like Homo-Erectus and Gaints included.
Was science deluded? My mind was confused when
I stepped in a room of flying illusions
."

- Yikes. So nice, on every level. The fuck are "Gaints" though lol...

"Atlantis subsiding and plummeting fast
as Atom and Eve were stuck in a lab.
I chuckled and laughed in shocking belief
as I shuffled my hands through hologram screens.
The knowledge was deep, it was awesome to think
the Martians were "we"
"

- Chilling.

Some serious talent on display here my man. Loved this.
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