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Old 06-21-2013, 08:25 PM   #6
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But dude this was a sick verse you dropped right here. You said,

Life’s like a box of chocolates full of vanilla distortion
It may sweeten the regrets of misfortune, or whet your skeletal organs
There’s nothing like exploring a music store as a skeptical orphan
He even rode the Zelda train, learning about The legend of Mormon
A collage of broader topics, yes, it’s important -
Let’s put a smile on that face…that Heath Ledger was born with


That was the perfect way to end that story, you displayed good illustration when you wrote this and really made me think. I like your metaphors as well, specially because they have so much truth in them. All in all it was a good drop and I enjoyed it. Keep em coming man.
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