I mean, cereal verse was better than the last one I read. Some cool ideas but nothing really connected for me.
Meta, opener was dope. Could tell you were playing around a little. Good wording throughout.
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
The sight’s laser. Lift the beam from the hip like a lightsaber/
Or pull up to ya doorstep...I’m on ya porch wavin like polite neighbors/
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