Read through this a few times now, the rhythmic pattern’s that enjoyable.
Loved these the most:
pinch to double-check i'm still human here,
show me a pauper about whom the affluent care.
- who can hurt you more than yourself?
God gave me wings but instead i flew to dirt
But really, everything read natural and came off as organic with clever turns of phrases. Sort of weaving in and out of interesting train of thoughts. Write more?
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