[Flow]

Nice collab

Sharp 9
Consistent throughout, not the most complex rhyme scheme out there but the flow was solid and it was littered with some nice fresh concepts which I am seeing less of in open mics these days. This was a solid drop and probably my favourite of the three.

Malachi
Love your raw awe style, in terms of flow I think the first half of your drop was the most impressive but don't think you gave yourself enough room for internals, but the syllable count and line to line rhymins made up for all of that. Felt you dropped off in the second half, wasn't feeling it to be honest but the first half was all fire.

Camp
Yours was an interesting one, your end rhymes were all b rhymes for the most part, wernt obvious yet the way you worded the entire piece made it subtle and not obvious so it worked well. For that I give you props that's a difficult feat when its not audio.
Enjoyed your internals but when it came down to the content it seemed sporadic undirected and a little of focus where the other two kept it slightly more on point if that makes sense. Got a slight Eminem feel from your verse.


Overall guys one of the better collabs I read in long time, not once was I bored or was it a chore to read and while I made some negative points I just wanted to give you guys some constructive critism as a better way of highlighting your differences in strengths as writers.

Keep it up