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Originally Posted by Universe
This was really good. Great, even. Reminded me of Nas at certain points. Flow was amazing, superb word choice, etc. Probably my fav I've seen from you. The beginning was strong but nowhere near as deep as the rest - It kept getting better...
Highlights:
"building a vault, concealiing the thoughts she wouldn't share
Cause it was easier to hide, then to find people who cared"
"Met the world at the peek of her highs, she cried
Cause a drug abusive life's one of the weakest designs
Peoples decline, the hypodermic needles, the crime
The creature inside, that let'er know'er dreams weren't alive"
Crazy. Would love to see you in a topical league, see how you'd do on a weekly basis with varying subject matter... Anyway, loved this
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Didnt mean to edit your feed. My mod options get in my way sometimes i click shit wrong by mistake. Appreciate the love bro.
If something jumps off like a real leageu or something with enough interest soon then i may give it a go. Been a few years and im extra rusty. But fuck it. Pz