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Old 04-25-2021, 03:07 PM   #3
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Beauty. I honestly wish I could write like you... so effortless and just plain brilliant at points.

"simple never complicated
sitting in your mother's basement
hope i die before you but i never say it just in case
"

- You pack so much into such tiny lines, impressive to read.

"button me down
build me castles til there's nothing around
our pyramids have leasing agents hunting them down
lose me in a desert when the vultures are out
trek towards any shadow that resembles a house
"

- I'm confused by this but love it all the same lol, think every line here was meant to be contradictory? Great imagery.

"burning for weeks, barefoot in convertible jeeps
searching through our dreamstate for a permanent sleep
"

- Vintage dead man.

Always excited to click on your posts. You never fail to deliver.
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