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Old 04-05-2021, 09:32 AM   #3
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this was pretty good. more than anything there was a bit of topical (not writing to topics 'topical') wisdom in this. you don't know what you've got 'til it's gone and all that. good rhythm, ain't feel too forced, some immediately relevant commentary. props.
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