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Old 04-05-2021, 08:49 AM   #3
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i thought this captured some of the purer, wholesome energy of when we did things just to do them. when i say we i mean everybody, and in things i mean everything. but, of course, we're talking about writing and rhyming just for fun -- something that seems to dissipate with our youth and in the pursuit of external validation. which, again, applies more broadly.

anyway, for that reason, i genuinely liked parts of this. the self-effacing humility, the honest enthusiasm, the simple but sincere schemes.

The sad fact is that I can’t rap.
I don’t try very much. That’s why my library sucks.


don't let it stop you from trying. or maybe you shouldn't try at all and just do. idk.
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