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Old 03-23-2021, 10:09 AM   #3
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I think you guys had a good energy and fed off of each other well, I also kind of liked that there wasn’t a definitive ending because the piece did better with the mystique. I liked the imagery of these “little prisons” and things like that. My favorite section was probably the ending I loved how well it was put together and ending on the scene of the deep snow was dope. That and the axe imagery gave me Shining vibes lol

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