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Old 03-18-2021, 08:59 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by ~RustyGunZ~ View Post
Your wording is really shaping up lately but some of the concepts are just dated. Pretty much any bar about a box is gonna be overdone, between a catalog of punches about coffins and ur girls VAGINA

Diss connect very played

Basically wordplays need to be either hyper personal and/or super creative otherwise it’s best to stick to metaphors and personals as much as possible

A lot of the judges have been around forever so you can’t just spit stuff that would get meh reactions in prime NC battle arena and expect your new grasp on wording to take it all the way
I appreciate that critique over “you know, Adverse was good, but Seth was good-Er”

I guess where my wording had been shoddy at times I started going for the low hanging fruit bar instead so I wasn’t shooting myself in the foot?

I’ll keep all that in my mind though, thank you
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