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Old 06-20-2013, 11:37 PM   #4
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Oats, what's up homie. Here's the feed I promised you my G

Thought this piece w

in the beginning our existence was akin to a black void
then it happened - a crash of platinum and iridium alloys
since then the tune of evolution has been written from that noise
as life stemmed from the materials delivered on asteroids

this segment was hella dope and the scheme was smooth as hell to me. Loved how you pulled this opening set of bars off and ended your syllables with the asteroids. Ill way to set the vibe

some call it coincidence, some divine intervention
either way it seems to be a hopeful cry for attention.
so take a little dipper in the pool of Ursa Minor's reflection
and realize we're looking home when we read the skies for direction

This right here is a typical trademark style I find in a lot of your works. You go frrom a dope pictorial image into what or how a person is affected by the picture you just drew. After a vivid display of what were supposed to be seeing.. bam, you pull a message from the mind of human kind out of th hat and quickly make it a relateable image.

but now Orion's perplexed and Andromeda's furrow-browed
as they tippy-toe to poke their nose above the walls of a burning cloud
but this smog could be solved if we were able to turn around
but we can't - we're in line for the iphone cuz the upgraded version's out

Lmao. So true. Its like wow, look at the big picture of things and you see how much ignorance we display towards the things that matter most. But then uhoh -don't let the fucking new iphone drop.. cause now everyone gives a fuck and is standing in liine wasting time and money on something far less imporrtant/valuable than the world we've destroyed to create that very same technology. Mindless fucks are we the peopl. Smh. Strongg message

what was once a staple of discovery is choking in small seams
we've relegated the heavens to what most of us call "dreams"
the void has returned in the form of issues never resolving
a new darkness is upon us: Man, the measure of all things

this had a deep feel to it. Dug what you were doing here

humanity is damned - it's Malthusian principle
since the peak in population's been confused with our pinnacle
now the internet is getting us foolishly cynical
look, even the Mayan calendar is moving to digital

Lmfaoo. So dope. The problem -or maybe its not a problem at all and its the beautiful elevation of the world and the people in it.. is how we've simply put down all of our roots and begun to pick up things in the future. I mean wtf, what happens when the worlds technology fails and we have no choice to be primitive again? Your gonna see a world of fucking pussies and bitches who can't survive because they don't know how to use a knife anymore and spend to muc time on their phones and shit lmao

we all got our problems - mental or physical - from Rasputin to Sitting Bull
though plenty red flags are waving we construe them as indigo
cuz our mood is our citadel: a tumor is minuscule
if there's no blood then fuck it, that wound isn't critical!
so chew on this riddle next time you chew your McGriddle
how famine for the masses means a feast for few individuals
respect to Buddha, Jesus and Confucius teachings - but the truth is more visceral
the places food is allocated is what humans are driven to

Hahaha, this whole section was fucking dope dog. Serious knowledge and a sick flow to go with it. Nasty oats, forr real

this movement is cyclical, don't even bother to run
cuz the sins of the father are reincarnate in sons
amongst celestial bodies, we're what the bodies become
but the sum of the parts is only part of the sum
we like to think of ourselves as the heart or the lung
but in this galaxy, reality's we're just the gargling tongue
the divisions and mistakes that we live with and embrace
are indications of the monumental carnage we've done
a terrorist for many is a martyr to some
and when we label each other, that's what they start to become
yet we're lauded and applauded for the scars that we've won
it's a curse, so further into darkness we plunge.
if we could only see that every star is our sun
then maybe we'd remember...that we are all one

Hey, enjoyed the entire piece.. I'm copping out and cutting it short again lolol. Falling asleep while I'm typing. But yo, I'm def NOMINATING THIS FOR HOF. Thought this shit was a dope ass drop as a whole and it should NOT be getting slept on

Wake up you fucks
And yo oats.. check ya fucking PM box. Don't be sleeping on our collab bro. Iis your go man, all I need is 8 lines dog lmmfaooooo @oats

GET ON IT YOU FUCK LMAO

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