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Rugged is da gawd tbh
I thought this shit was dope for a couple reasons..
Your build ups are very suspense filled. What I mean is this, you drop your settup line, and you punchline is completely on point with it in most cases. What I like is how your settups leave your punches wide open for almost anydirection to be gone . Your style reminds me a lot of my own back before I broke loose with mine and polished it down to where it is now. I think your one of the best new faces we have in OM and you got a lot of room to grow and become ill as fuck. Definitely have a style that I like and its gonna be sick once you find that next level and take it there
I have a confession to make, im less then seconds away
From ending it all and staring death in the face
Such a dope intro man. Thought it set the tone up perfectly for what was to come.
Im so Tired of living this way and how my body is inhibiting chains
In continuous pain and unable to see significant gains.
Im just waiting for that "something" to help me pick up the pace
Till then im stuck in this rut and believe me its a critical phase
Thought these lines were pretty ill. Shit I can definitely relate to. Didn't like the bar or two before this though, felt like it was forced or not as attatched to you emotionally as this segment was.
For the most part I dug this drop. I'm a fan man, hopefully you turn it up more soon cause I got big faith in you and I think your gonna be vicious in no time man. Keep posting and responding to others G. As always your a pleasure to have around. P's