[fraze]

Originally Posted by Universe

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In the words of Kurt Cobain before he gave his shotgun a taste...
"They laugh at me because I'm different; I laugh at them because they're all the same"
nice opening

Knock ya dentures loose for years, who compares to the most ruthless here?
Won by skin of your teeth, but I'll keep those new veneers as souvenirs
this was nice to me

Some figures of speech are unheard of; I can't recall my statements off-hand
But compared to you I'm more of a physicist than a shaken pop can
haha. kinda corny but i like it

You flake out on me like dandruff, seasoned vets think confetti just fell
Now I bet you'll speak out of turn like a GPS redirecting itself
GPS is nice

"Nothing shocks me these days" Silence. I'll hit ya with a taser zap
Too bad punchlines are lost on you like generation alpha with paper maps
cool concept

Used to command respect, but I know you lost all your fight bro
Cuz in retrospect you're all Jaded... just like The Tonight Show
cool

This is no game, my art craves attention - I'm making it known
You mad? Gotta be Stark raven though if you see yourself taking the throne
nice

That's how your relationship broke... man you damaged it good
Now you wait on her hand and foot like how half-shipped mannequins stood
wording is a little rough but cool concept

At a standstill and shook; I can't compete with what your bipolar mind delivers
I can tell you all the reasons that I'm sicker but melting polar ice is quicker
ok

I hear you chomping at the bit like Pacman for whatever I may reveal
I take in all your bull, dozing off... but still can't level the playing field
ok

I'll buy a vowel; I have a consonant stutter when my mouth doesn't shut
Don't know if I took my talons down south or an owl just lunged...
haha. this is cool

I Mother Earth? I'm OTHER earth - All you nerds eat my dust
All that terror-forming mars your work quicker than Elon Musk
this is forced but i still like the concept

Delivery's not up to snuff, like a still born one month shy
Enough's enough; Y'all can't rhyme unless you build toward a punchline
Layouts barely align, bars are paced with no rhythmic signs
Lines aren't clearly defined, like a parking space in the winter time
Your pre-writtens are in high demand? Ehh, maybe on paper
But these victims of mine I hide 'em and... save them for later
That's staying in your favor... What I tap into ain't that simple
Each line has more panes-taking detail than stained glass windows
shade

All the bravado on this forum is not something I have to retort to
Cuz when standing before you all you have to say is, "Small world"...

... of course dude.
cool closer

Interesting styleblending. Some of the wp was forced but generally clever punchlines and some creative concepts. Cool seeing you do a battle style verse.