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Split · 06-20-2013, 06:51 PM

Lyrically/ rhyming YDK edged it a bit. didn't like the run in sentences and forced rhymes (strife....), format could use work.

Liked Tyson's message more, was more cohesive in terms of phrases+ structure/ didn't use enjambment so badly.

Neither edged the other in terms of creativity. Boring pic

V/Tyson

06-20-2013, 06:51 PM	#9
Split . Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 8,898 Battle Record: 27-22 Rep Power: 85899398	Lyrically/ rhyming YDK edged it a bit. didn't like the run in sentences and forced rhymes (strife....), format could use work. Liked Tyson's message more, was more cohesive in terms of phrases+ structure/ didn't use enjambment so badly. Neither edged the other in terms of creativity. Boring pic V/Tyson __________________ http://split8.yolasite.com